We literally packed the car and left very abruptly.
In the momentwhen you hit rock bottom,
당신의 최악의 순간,
can you tell me what that was?
그게 어떤 거였는지 말해주실 수 있어요?
Well, I decided it was time to leave my husband.
음, 제 남편을 떠날 때가 됐다고 결정을 내렸었죠.
Okay, that's a big deal.
알겠어요, 큰 결정이었네요.
We literally packed the car and left very abruptly.
우리는 말 그대로 차에 짐을 싣고 되게 갑작스럽게 떠났죠.
I want to talk about what to dowhen you hit those rock bottom moments,
where you just feel like you want to give up.
I want to talk about what to dowhen you hit those rock bottom moments,
당신이 바닥을 친 순간에무엇을 해야 하는지에 대해 이야기하고 싶어요.
where you just feel like you want to give up.
당신이 포기하고 싶다는 기분이 들 때요.
좋아요 :D
Thank you for your time today! I hope you enjoyed the lesson. Please don't forget to review and practice the corrections. Have a great day.:)
보완해봐요 :D
Grammar
Point: I noticed that there were some errors in the use of prepositions and tenses. Please practice them more. :) I noticed the use of articles. Please try to practice applying and using our articles - a, an, the
You said: the wedding woman's age
Better to say: the women's age for marriage is
Vocabulary
Point: You can try paraphrasing or using synonyms to avoid repetition or redundancy of words. Please practice more vocabulary.
You said: the baby in the woman's body
Better to say: babies in the woman's womb
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I'm in the house--X
I'm at home--0
most of cases--X
in most cases--0
for Christians--
some traditional ceremony--X
ceremonies--0
after ceremony--X
after the ceremony--0
in some grandparents eyes--X
in some elderly people's eyes--0
some brother--X
some brothers--0
don't want to go there--X
doesn't want to go there--0
the wedding woman's age--X
the women's age for marriage is--0
even though she don't want a man--
even though she doesn't want a man--0
even when they have been married for a long time??