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as scheduled

예정되었던 대로

 

 

This is the third event in the Designing the Future of Georgetown Speaker Series,

and I appreciate you all being here.

This process has proceeded as scheduled.

 

 

This is the third event in the Designing the Future of Georgetown Speaker Series,

이번 행사는 Georgetown Speaker Series의 세 번째 Designing the Future 행사이고,

and I appreciate you all being here.

모두 와주셔서 감사드립니다.

This process has proceeded as scheduled.

이 과정은 예정되었던 대로 진행되었습니다.

 

 

So data, if it's done well, and if you have good information on loan terms and conditions,

it actually makes the lending marketplace more competitive,

and I think also, if you do it carefully, you won't get wrong conclusions,

you won't get unnecessary litigation.

 

 

So data, if it's done well, and if you have good information on loan terms and conditions,

그래서 데이터가, 잘 된다면, 그리고 대출 계약조건에 대한 좋은 정보를 가지고 있다면,

it actually makes the lending marketplace more competitive,

데이터가 대출시장을 더 경쟁력 있게 만들 것이고,

and I think also, if you do it carefully, you won't get wrong conclusions,

그리고, 주의 깊게 한다면, 잘못된 결과를 얻지 않을 것이고,

you won't get unnecessary litigation.

불필요한 소송을 하게 되지 않을 것입니다.

좋아요 :D

Thank you for your time today! I hope you enjoyed the lesson. Please don't forget to review and practice the corrections. Have a great day.:)

보완해봐요 :D

• Grammar

  Point: I noticed that there were some errors in the use of prepositions and tenses. Please practice them more. :) I noticed the use of articles. Please try to practice applying and using our articles - a, an, the

  You said: make the world economy down

  Better to say: the economy went down
• Vocabulary

  Point: You can try paraphrasing or using synonyms to avoid repetition or redundancy of words. Please practice more vocabulary.

  You said: the food products

  Better to say: for perishable goods
• Pronunciation

  Point: There are no noticeable errors in pronunciation. Just practice words with an L and R sound in one.

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what are your plans for today??

I go to the--_X

I will go to --0

I'll bring her back home---0

guarantee

warranty period

shipping cost

I've seen them

do you recently change or refund your products?

what was the most recent product??

yesterday evening---X

last night---0

2 type of imported---X

types--0

my wife ordered to me--X

my wife had me refund the money for the beef--0

cheapest--

no fee--

A. There's no charge for repairs during the warranty period.

might not to choose---X

B. Consumers tend not to choose products that require an additional shipping cost.

promise--

produced---

C. I can guarantee you that our products are manufactured in a clean and hygienic environment.

Do you consider the warranty period when choosing what to purchase?

is the one year--X

is one year---0

electronics??

for perishables--

at that case---X

in that case---0

A. You can extend the warranty period with an additional fee.

additional charge--

warranty period--

with the--

B. You can calculate the shipping cost based on the weight of products and the distance.

the more quality--X

C. An expensive price does not always guarantee better quality.

I listened--X

more long---X

Yes, I heard that. However, we could have more reasonable prices and longer warranty periods.

Then, we could provide a 10 percent discount if you double the orders.

we will discount the shipping cost half, that's our last suggest--X

Well, then if you extend the contract period by the end of the next year, we could discount the shipping cost by half. It's our last offer.

Excellent choice. I'll guarantee we would provide you the best products.

what makes a great negotiator?

make the one the good negotiate--X

makes a good negotiator--0

at that case--X

in that case--0

I'm not sales man--X

a sales man--0

I'm an engineer--0

we selling---X

we sell--0

make the world economy down--X

the economy went down--